How are My Character designs and artstyle?

[Freemints30]

I'm working on my designs character designs for a future comic and I would like some feed back on how they are now.
This pic below the head shots of all 5 of my main Characters

The pics below are older pics of some of two of these characters. They are not really official(not how I plan to draw) but these two were the closest to what I wanted

I have other sheets for the rest but they are far from what I have shown above.
So what do you guys think? And way to improve them?

[Felia]

Hello!
I think your characters have distinct personalities. The colors help distinguish them better, too.
For things to improve on:
- Improve on your technical skills overall. Axelle's right hand (our left) position bothers me so much.
- Consistency. When putting up a spreadsheet, consider lining up the front/back/side views together. Right now they don't feel coherent.
- Better presentation. A good character sheet also means good presentation. Axelle looks as if he's squished together inside a page! Poor thing. And the text.... the text is hard to read. Consider using an actual font, not handwriting.

Overall good start, I like the colors and energy. I would suggest you clean up some more, and improve on the art. Look up some character spreadsheet online so you can get a better idea of what to do. I know character spreadsheets don't get shown most of the time, but the less chaotic reference you have to go through, the quicker your actual comic-making will be!

Good luck and have fun!

[DeformedSunflower]

A common rule of thumb for good character design is distinguishable silhouette. I think they have their own iconic looks, but Hildred's hair looks a little too similar to Adam's. The only thing distinguishing them is that Adam is wearing a hat. So maybe consider changing either of their hairstyle a little?

[snailienz]

I love the designs for the characters themselves, but I think you could definitely improve on anatomy specifically. I know it doesn't seem like it, but even styles as cartoony as yours need to know it. Gotta know the rules before you can break them!

[Freemints30]

Thanks so far for the feed back. I was considering using a font for the writing but...I just thought "well I can read my hand writing so its probably not that bad" I completely forgot the reason why I now type every thing. :b.
Way I still need a bit more practice but I happy for the complements and criticisms

[jensrichard77]

You have talent. And you are not afraid to go your own way.

The personality is definitely in high focus and you have a clear vision on what to expect.

All in all you have done a great job.

But personally. I do not like it at all. But that’s just a matter of taste

[irene_addler]

you have a LOT of personality in your drawing, and I think it'll serve you well! It gives your art a lot of character, and that'll serve you well, art with character, with heart, is the best kind! keep up the good work!

[OttoGruenwald]

Nice! Your characters have a lot of personality!