Mostly for the existing comic, I feel my writing style could use some work as opposed to the art department that most people tend to focus on.
I don't mind if its harsh or anything. But mostly I would like to try and improve as a story teller so I can use it for my future stories. Like, to go back to some comments, One said I don't have character conflict. A quick google search for what that means leads to advice for general conflict, which I feel Ive gotten down?
But they also said that without character conflict people won't... talk about it? Which they also said might be a bad thing since it leaves to my general issue of silently reading and liking the work.
I would like to ask politely but I don't want to annoy people with what seems like nagging. Haha, and friends seem too nice. Yknow?
Thanks for the comment, Kate!