okay so ..... I think you might be too impatient
you're rather new to art, right?
those story time cartoons can be a fun read, and the advantage is that you DONT have to be a super skilled artist
but you still need to make it look appealing enough.
rn the colors are too clashing and it's a bit hard to follow what's going on writing wise as well
kudos for doing your best, but consider looking at a lot of similar comics and figure out why they are working so well (take especially good note of color and simplicity)
I'm sure your sub count will grow along with you as an artist