It seems fine to me, I do think that you'll just need to continue posting more to gain momentum Especially for the first few episodes it's not uncommon to not get that many views because it'll only be in the "fresh" section of the website for a little while before getting buried. It gets easier as you gain more readers.
One thing I would be careful about though is the font for the speech bubbles. It seems to be hand lettered, which is fine, but you have to be careful to keep it tidy in that case. The last 3 panels of episode two look pretty good but it's a little hit or miss above that, with some of the text looking a little sketchy and loose. You may consider going back and trying to tighten some of those up to be more like those last 3 panels before you get too far down the line.
Another option is to make a custom handwritten font somewhere like https://www.calligraphr.com/en/ You can make a free account and put together a custom font so that you can just type with your handwriting It takes some practice and tweaking to get everything even and looking nice, but if you get a good result it can save a lot of time in the long run!