interesting concept. nice art. reminds me of old American comics so I love the color scheme. The paneling isn't bad at all and you are very good with background and everything flows smoothly. ok so now let me explain some few things that bugged me.
The font size is way too small, like the moment I have to squint to read you have lost me completely. there is nothing more irritating that small font and I wear glasses so not a good practice for me.
secondly, I personally don't like religious concept incorporated into comics because it makes me feel odd. I dont know how to explain it but it makes me uncomfortable. but thats just personal preference. I didn't subscribe because again, its a bit far from the genre I enjoy.
lastly. good work, just keep at it and dont forget to increase size font because if you dont, very few people will engage in your work.