Hello, I am a new storyteller and I would like to know how my story is. Everyone can see different things wrong with a story. I have had a few people look at it and they found different things that I missed.
(I haven't made something on a forum before so if I have done this wrong I am sorry and please let me know)
This is where my story is.
(If you want me to give the google docs version of this let me know)