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Jul 2018

Thanks :smiley:

I'd like to animate the rest of the characters soon... if I find other voice actors to voice them.

Wasn't continuously working on it since I had to juggle it with my animation job at the time ^^;

Took me 3 days to do the rough animation, but the clean-up and coloring was 2-3 weeks :slight_smile:

Wow this is really good. I would actually love to see you're web comic in animated form. However without a team, animation would take a very long time.

The first plan was to make the comic animated, but maybe in the future if ever :slight_smile:

This is really well done! As a pro in the industry I can give you a little crit here.

  1. You've got GREAT timing!
  2. Clean up looks good
  3. Very fluid motion!
  4. I'm noticing his eyes are looking 'floaty' in the "I'm positive that's not happening." I'm betting there's a few tweens in there that need some shifting.
  5. I really wish that he used his body a bit more? Like the bit at the end is great with his arms flopping around, and I love the way he stretches his head up at "I'll TRY." But the part that needs bit more extenuating is "Alright!" When people say 'alright' they often have their hands up in a defensive gesture....in fact I don't see his hands at ALL in this, and as someone whose looked at a lot of reels that tells me the animator is usually nervous about animating hands. Kind of like how new artists shove hands in pockets, behind their backs or behind the head to avoid drawing them.

All in all really good job. Can't wait to see the next piece and I really hope you try out using hands next time. :heart:

Good job! It reminds me of that one obscure Disney show called Brandy and Mr. Whiskers

Wow, I can easily see this as a cartoon (on tv). Congrats!! :heart_eyes:

Oh my gosh a pro thank you so much :blush: :heart:

Yes I will take note of these in future animations :smile: I was new to the industry when I first worked on this, now I do hope I can improve more :sunny:

5 months later

THIS LOOKS AWESOME! You just got me excited to get back into school after my wife finishes so that I can start doing this stuff!

its very smooth and clean (but you do this for a living, you are a professional XD), inspires me to do one for my characters

also how did i miss this!?