Thank you so much for your offer! Now if only I could figure out how to share a huge psd file..
I wanted to thank everyone for taking their time to offer a thoughtful post, I just finished reading through them all. I didn't expect so many helpful replies, even though I knew the people here are amazing and supportive (sounds so cheesy, but I'm seriously... blown away).
I took a little break to calm down, and then I went back to my previous episodes and edited the dialogue with some advice in mind from some posts on this thread to make it flow better. It still needs work, but I feel a lot more confident in sharing my work now.
I posted the rant when I was at a really low point, and I'm um.. a bit embarrassed about it now, but I'm really glad I reached out. I know I'll be coming back and rereading this thread whenever I feel unsure.