I am working on my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to improve the Novel.
Here is a nice little book description that doesn't spoil too much.
In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanies a scout team on a mission to uncover the truth behind a vanished colony. But as they breach the eerie silence of the deserted outpost, they stumble upon a colossal artifact..
Suddenly, they find themselves ripped from the red sands of Mars and hurled into the unknown world full of wonders, magic, and horrors beyond their wildest imaginations
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