NeuHorizon

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Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much..... In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout te…

Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team o…

Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much.. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team …

Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much... In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team…

Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much.... In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout tea…

Thanks for the feedback. It helps a lot.

I am working on my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to improve the Novel. Here is a nice little book description that doesn't spoil too much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanies a scout team…

I am working on my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to improve the Novel. Here is a nice little book description that doesn't spoil too much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanies a scout team…

would love feedback on how to improve the Novel. Here is a nice little book description that doesn't spoil too much.. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanies a scout team on a mission to uncover the truth be…

would love feedback on how to improve the Novel. Here is a nice little book description that doesn't spoil too much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanies a scout team on a mission to uncover the truth be…

I am working on my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to improve the Novel. Here is a nice little book description that doesn't spoil too much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanies a scout team…

I am working on my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to improve the Novel. Here is a nice little book description that doesn't spoil too much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanies a scout team…

well, kinda, I did draw the whole design, but I put it through an AI software and then drew over it. I had to redraw both legs because they were just missing. also fingers, head, and half a arm. but its just a temporary cover I'm working on an actual one right now. here is the one I'm working on. …

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Feel free to roast me, but I would also like criticism. anyway here is my book In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team on a mission to uncover the truth behind a vanished colony. But as the…

Also, I'm trying to decide on a name for my series. I'm thinking of something like "Echos of Calamity" and a subtitle for book 1, "Divergence." I would love feedback anyway. Enough of my ramblings. Here is the book description... In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shroude…

if you like the Novels and comics you read make sure to give feed back... it helps a lot. ill start. i'm Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much. In the heart of the barren Martian lan…

i'm Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much.. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout t…

i'm Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout te…

ill start, i'm Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying…

Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much..... In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout te…

Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much.... In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout tea…

Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much.. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team …

Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much... In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team…

Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel.. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team …

just added 2 more episodes and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team on …

just updated and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team on a mission to u…

Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team on a mission to uncover the truth behind a vanished colony. But as they breach the eerie…

Working for my first subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel. Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much. In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team on a…