Hello i am new to this forum and am looking for some cool people to check out my webcomic and give me some advice, Story art or whatever is on your mind. I have been drawing and writing this for 4 years now so improvements have been made. Thanks
The first thing, which have caught my attention in the first issue, were blurred lines.The first thing, which have caught my attention in the last issue, were still blurred lines.Do you resize your drawings before uploading? If so, I'd suggest either to try another interpolation algorithm for resizing, or just draw in the final size from the beginning and don't resize at all. If you don't resize your drawings, the problem may lay in the brushes you use. Maybe these brushes aren't clear-cut enough?
yes i have to resize the images so thats why its blury
I'll give a say about the storytelling a bit . Note that I only read earlie chapters and I'm no expert myself, so feel free to disagree
I feel like the story have more things to "tell" than "show," I don't know if that concept also applied to comic but that can certainly be improved
The intro is long and full of action, but perhaps it is a bit hard for reader to tell what is actually happening; especially with the flashback scene.
The pacing, IDK? Market fight, flashback to the birthday boy (who's ripped AF at 13 ), going to some place, market fight again, huggity huggety sunset scene with water girl and an info page, then eight AM drinking with a green dude. I don't know but it's a bit cramped
I feel like some informations are dumped in the first part of the story. I think the info page can wait and won't affect perception of the story at that page.
It's just the matter of taste, but I think the panelling is too tight.
Thanks for the feed back. the rushed pace is only in the first chapter to give the reader a full taste of what the story is about
I think that is why If you cram too many things up front, readers will think the rest of the comic will have the same pace. It's became better later on, but first impression is important I guess.