I'm currently in the process of redrawing my own comic because as it stands it's a hot garbage fire. You can take a go at it (I mean even I'm redrawing it, cuz that shit's bad) if you want but obviously you don't have to. I mostly just wanted to drop by and say that you're doing an epic job on these redraws and they look super cool.
(Gonna apologize ahead of time if you do because apparently Shilo's shape is notoriously hard to draw)