I want you to evaluate this comic by the summary and the style of the drawing

[ALI]

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[jwabeasley]

Summary: Needs improvement, it doesn't sell me on what's unique about your story or make me want to read it. Center it on the protagonist, focus on why I should care more than a summary of his backstory. Sell me on the drama and the mystery!
2/10

Art: You've improved a lot over the past few months. It's functional, at this point you might think about working on varying your composition and thinking about shape language. All four images are composed to center the eye right in the middle of the frame, when the eye should travel throughout the frame in a composed direction. Also, the desert doesn't fit well with the line art of the characters - it looks like a processed photograph rather than a drawing, with the clouds brushed in on top.
5/10

[NOOR_ASAKZ05]

The drawing is good but the background is vulgar and the summary is not attractive.

[justincarbunkle]

The sultan disappears, or the son? The wording in that second half is hard to decipher. Entire summary can be simplified. It should emphasize the core conflict. It should quickly tell a reader why your story is interesting and worth caring about.

“Years after abandoning his kingdom, a humbled Sultan is begged by his people to reunite the divided land.” Add a few more details to punch it up, but still keep it brief.

Art looks nice. Characters look solid, I like the violet blue hue and the simple desert background.

[jwabeasley]

Hey @ALI, the desert environment and relatively realistic style reminds me of one of my favorite comics of all time, Shaman Warrior. It's not a very well-known manhwa, but I was heavily inspired by it as a teen. It takes place in a Gobi desert environment instead of the Sahara, but it's still a desert and you might get some inspiration by seeing the way Park Joong-ki draws his visuals.

Here's some example pages (not in order):

[wolflu66]

I think the four images currently don’t seem strongly related to each other, making it hard for others to accurately evaluate the comic’s content. However, the image in the bottom right is visually a really great design.