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Nov 2018

Hmmm... I guess for art that is simple, it's pretty good. You could probably have shadings on the forehead because of the hair.

Also, what's up? xP

Hey! I'm good! I can head to discord too :v: And thanks for the feedback!

I love your color choices. :smiley: Shading on some parts (like mask on the first drawing) seems a little flat to me, but that's it.

very lovely! :smiley: I like them very much, but just because you are asking for area of improvement: the hands are a bit strange in the second one. all the fingers have the same size, which I don't really know if it is your style, but the thumb is very awkward and one hand is bigger than the other. I like that the character has big hands but one has a tiny wrist and the other has a thick one. And maybe the "text Angel pastel hell" can be improved a little. Maybe you don't want the text to stand out and interrupt the drawing but the text can ad some personality to the style. You can use a bolder font and make the letters green. If this is the name of the comic, then you can definitely play a little more with the fonts.
Overall it is very pretty to look at.

I think a little more contrast in your shading would look nice in your style! Also, you might consider adding some highlights to show depth. Basically, you should bring out your values a lot more and exaggerate the lighting. Here's what I mean:


all i did was darken the values a little more and add some highlights. (sorry it looks kinda rushed) Other than that, your art looks really cool :smiley:

Thanks so much! I really like what you said about the lighting! I'm definitely going to try to play more with light and contrast levels