Hello! I've already reviewed Centris a bit, but I have to say that your cover art is gorgeous and definitely drew me in. The summary doesn't draw me in all that much, because I'm not that much of a fantasy nerd, but I like that you introduce the main plot threads quickly. I also found one error, "is, without realizing, drafted to become a paw in the silent war between the factions of the court". I believe it should be "pawn" instead? Aside from that, there's a little bit of wordiness that doesn't work in your favor. For a bit of a catchier blurb, you might want to condense it a bit. For example, you could edit the sentence above into "a young mage ... is unwittingly drafted into the silent war between the factions of the court." or "a young mage unwittingly becomes a pawn in the silent war between the factions." Cutting out words and phrases that mess with the rhythm will help a lot. It's also just a lot of info for a blurb.
I have a few concerns for the hook of this one. First is the cover, though I can't do much about it because I have no money to spare for commissions. It doesn't really strike me as a BL cover, and I also think that on Tapas, characters sell really well, so having a cover without that might drag me down. There's also the fact that my setting is based on the Joseon dynasty, but there's nothing on my cover to represent that, so the reader would have to look into the tags and my blurb to get that part. Beyond that, my blurb might actually be a bit too short. I really try to walk the line of not revealing too much while still showing the core of my story to draw people in. I don't want to misrepresent it. Anywho, let me know what you think!