I have not followed the format I set. I think your story is interesting, very much so. But as it is now, it's impossible to judge. The things you are writing don't seem to mingle together, it is confusing. It starts with killing someone, then one line about ecstasy and switches to an info dump immediately, it was hard to figure out what was happening. This keeps happening in your later chapters as well.
The important thing that you should fix first, though, is your grammar and general spellings. I understand that English is not your first language, but you need to study it a bit more. The tenses, spelling, and punctuations need fixing. I can suggest using Grammarly or ProWritingAid, but before that, I will really suggest reviewing the basics a bit.
Other than this, you might want to redo your cover in the correct dimensions. I can make it out when I see it as your banner, but the cover itself is too messy.
I am sure you are writing a great story, but I think you will need to put some more effort into the basics and make it better. All the best!