I'd love feedback for my comic!

[OverlordJC]

Greetings Tapastic family,

My name's JC, and I'm pretty new around here, but not 100% new to making art and comics. That said, it's been quite a while
since I've made and shared comics online for people to check out, so I'd love to to know what you all think about my first two posts! No matter what your level, rank, experience, there's ALWAYS something you can learn!

My comic's name is "E S C A P E", and it falls under the Horror genre.

You can start here: https://tapastic.com/series/E-s-c-a-p-e

Feel free to leave any feedback, or just a greeting if nothing else. No contribution is too small in my opinion. Thank you kindly for reading and taking the time to have a look.

Cheers!
-JC

[joannekwan]

I think it's off to a great start! The pacing and art's good, the suspense is palpable. And you have a sizable amount of subscribers already with just two episodes! That speaks for itself really.

[Mocha]

I think it's off to a great start so far!
You seem to have a pretty good grasp of the horror genre and building up tension in a scene.
My only critique for it at this stage is to becareful with your grey values, I noticed that in some panels there weren't enough dark tones which made everything seem a bit too uniform with all the tones being in the mid-grey area.
Other than that I'm loving the art style and can't wait for more updates! Keep up the good work!

[OverlordJC]

Thank you very much. I want to to make the reader feel "antsy" and build some momentum as you scroll through the episode. That's really encouraging so far! Thank you for replying : )

[OverlordJC]

Thank you very much. That build up and tension is what I'm looking for, especially in a lot of the action sequences as well as subtle ones.
I think you're right about the values. I wanted to see how it looked while avoiding "true blacks", but I think more contrast will put more impact into some scenes. Thank you, this is some helpful feedback

There will be a new update very soon!
Cheers!