I'd love more reads <3

ivorymoon20 2024-12-07 19:00:46 UTC #1

Hi,

I just updated my novel yesterday, and I would love if I could get someone to read my story and leave comments. Comments help me improve my writing and see the reader side of things. Unfortunately, I'm not getting many reads, so I'm not able to improve like I'd hope.

Subbing is a choice I'll leave to you. If you read my story and enjoyed it enough, you are more than welcome to sub and continue to follow along as I update; if not, its totally fine!

The quick summary of my story is that a girl dies, but then she wakes up inside the body of a three-year-old in some forest with a video game notification above her head. The problem? She doesn't want to continue to live, but being inside this new body, she struggles between life and death.

If you enjoy the isekai trope, mixed with open world concepts, adventure, death, action, enemies to lovers, different POV's, different creatures created by me, kingdoms, an empire, magic, a ton of mystery, and so much more, then please just give my book five minutes of your time.

My goal is to have 40 subs by the end of the month (i'm at 37 now) and 200 reads (I'm at 179)

Sinful_Pen 2024-12-07 19:23:57 UTC #2

i need more sub and viewers.

Asukem, an 18-year-old orphan from Rikros, is transformed into a sinkin by an evil demon who wields power to torment souls with her lust. Ah'keim, a powerful being with a mysterious ulterior motive, mentors him as he struggles to regain his humanity and undo the damage caused by the female demon. With the help of new friends who try to help him escape his fate as a sinkin, Asukem sets out to fight the void and gain control over his powers, all while seeking redemption for his past sins.ins-of-Rikros-Ahkeim-and-the-Sin-Kin-curse/info

ivorymoon20 2024-12-07 19:31:07 UTC #3

Hi, I'll read and comment on the first 4 chapters of your book if you'll do the same with mine.

Aeneas1 2024-12-07 20:08:42 UTC #4

If you have already subbed, please say so.

MK_Wizard 2024-12-07 22:56:29 UTC #5

Here is my action fantasy comic. Be warned that it is rated M.

Astra the high sorceress of the Luminous Empire is famous for three things; protecting the innocent, her romance with Prince Ira and her rivalry with her sarcastic and cynical archenemy Psychoborg who happens to be the champion of the enemy Ominous Kingdom. However, one fateful mission turns her world upside down and opens her eyes. She learns that Psychoborg is not what she thought he was and the real secret behind her powers is a series of revelations that are far from divine...

Krysteena 2024-12-08 06:13:53 UTC #6

I got you I subbed and here is my novel to read!

ivorymoon20 2024-12-08 07:09:15 UTC #7

Thank you! I'll sub back.

acearnold7 2024-12-08 08:12:41 UTC #8

️ Volkermord ️

An action-packed science fantasy like no other—where words and art collide to create something bold and new. Experience a story that pushes the boundaries of storytelling, merging dynamic visuals with a gripping narrative.

In 2158, the world is on the brink of collapse.

Global tensions between Arga and Yuropa are about to ignite a catastrophic Third Territorial War, but something far worse strikes first—a world-splitting apocalyptic event wipes out half of humanity, as leaving only chaos in its wake. The survivors are trapped on one side, cut off from the other by a blinding, impassable light. As survivors huddle within Dome cities, monstrous creatures emerge, tearing apart what remains of society.

Amidst the destruction, a group of soldiers embarks on a dangerous mission.

Their goal: reclaim what has been lost and uncover the terrifying truths that lurk behind this new reality. With time running out and death around every corner, these warriors must risk everything to protect the remnants of humanity.

️ One boy holds the key to salvation or destruction. ️

Darius, an ordinary young man, suddenly inherits the power of a weapon capable of changing everything. But will he rise as the hero humanity needs—or will darkness consume him?

Destiny calls. Darkness awaits.