Wow.
Okay, no comment about the graphics, because no jokes, I LOVE it. It's elaborately drawn, with the proper details and effects. It looked really lively, and I was instantly immersed into the story! So GJ on that.
The only thing bothering me is that the words are a tad too small, so it's rather difficult to read them. Maybe make the speech balloons bigger, so you can upsize the fonts too?
Other than that, everything's amazing. Well done!
