If you saw this cover ,would it make you want to check out my webcomic?

[emmaemeh2011]

Here's the cover I've drawn for my upcoming webtoon , but I'm not really liking it that much,

first the art of the cover is supposed to be better than the comic but it's actually the opposite , plus i'm not liking the colors combination ,also it's got nothing to do with the title
but I really don't want to spend another day staring at an empty canvas ( idk why I'm so bad at drawing covers ) so I'll just use it and focus on the actual comic...
So would you click on my webcomic if you stumbled upon it ?

[CarltonIsaac]

Nope, kind of dull.
Make it livelier and colourful with some dynamic action poses.

[dewarcomics]

maybe make them express what their personality is like or their relation to each other. I'm guess there's some love triangle? But try to show off what each character is all about. Is one a hot head? is the other the more calm collected guy? Is she clueless, or doesn't want to do with any of them?

I don't know your characters. Make me curious!

Keep trying! Make sure you share your next attempt I want to see!

Best of luck and hope to see more!
- Yan

[DualDragons]

I don't think I would, but that's mostly the genre.
Since the two guys look like they are twins, I'd suggest making them express their personalities so people can tell them apart

[WillowTree]

I would! It looks like the kind of work that would be right up my alley. All the brightness and the happy faces. Makes me know I'll be in for a story that's going to be a good time and relatively low angsty. Maybe make the title a little more bold though since it kind of blends in

[Beltaine]

it's not my cup of tea but i actually think it's nice that it's not all bright and heavy.
it makes it look like a calm and nice story

[SignedA]

I'm not sure I would click, but what I'm sure is that the graphical style really stands out from all the other webtoons. The only things that could be reworked would be, as others point out, the title which may lack visibility and the somewhat too striking resemblance of the two boys. Unless in your story it is indeed twins in love with the same girl.

Otherwise your title reminds me of someone who wrote it on a foggy window. You know, when it's raining and you're in the car ... and you might be dissolving a little face from the fog that has formed on the door glass. Well, it looks like this! Besides, it could be the door of a bus, who knows !? ; )

[jcmraz]

No. But that requires elaboration. It looks very good and showcases what I should expect in general from the story. That said I'm probably not interested in that specific type of story. But if I was, I think this would work on me. I'm the wrong audience. Good cover though

[Legendofgenii]

I can't really comment, because I don't like my own cover lol - but I was going to say if you'd don't even like it then it's not the one.

[Rhonder]

Not particularly... but for me the main reason is that the title implies that it's a romance comic and I'm not too interested in that genre

As an aside, if you end up revising the title, you may want to make the title itself a bit larger and more legible. It looks fine while I'm looking at it on my laptop screen on these forums where it appears at a decently large size, but on the website and especially the app the cover thumbnail will be a lot smaller and I feel that it'll be hard to read. The green of "ticket to t" doesn't stand out against the sky color well, and the "of" overlapping the girl's head makes it challenging to make out as well. Maybe consider moving the characters down a bit to give the title room to breath at the top, increasing the size a tad, and playing around with the colors some more. I think if it were all the purple color of "love" it would contrast with the sky well. Or perhaps it needs a stroke or something, idk.

[AnonymousHouseCat]

I like the image! It looks polished to me, it has a good composition and I like that the girl in the middle looks directly at you, but I think the text could be worked with a bit: like make it bolder/larger or add a stroke around it to make it pop?

[vblairehawthorne]

We have some rather negative views around this cover, but I genuinely think it's good. I think what this cover need is good typography, and I would seriously check it out. Make the title a bit clearer and maybe play with the colors a bit to make it livelier, and you'd hook me and others too! You did a great job on it!

[flowershop]

It's a great cover in my opinion! I would click your comic based on the cover because your art seems nice :3 I think the art style will draw a lot of people in especially those who enjoy anime.

plus i'm not liking the colors combination

If you dislike the color combo, you can always play around w/ saturation and vibrancy in your art program. You could also try changing the background to make the characters pop more! I think it's really great. Good work!

[emmaemeh2011]

i thought about making dynamic poses but I couldn't fit in 3 characters at once with the poses i had in mind,
and thanks for the feedback

[emmaemeh2011]

Thank you ,yeah I'll definitely make another one some time,
and about the showing their personalities while making them interact with each other is the challenging part about
drawing a cover ( for me at least)
but I'll keep trying

[emmaemeh2011]

yeah i understand, now everyone is into romance
in the comic the two guys look much more different than how they came out in the cover

[KikiTaiga]

I would say no and here's a tip to make a good cover: to make people checking out you have to make a cover that mostly shocks the viewers at the first sight and readers are going to be intrigued about why the cover is like this... for example: the two guys kiss the cheeks of the girl and the girl have an expression of surprise or something like that. Funny to say... you have to do a clickbaity picture to make the viewers intrigued and clicking it... What I do: a clickbaity cover that will actually appear in the webtoon/comic itself

[emmaemeh2011]

thank you sure, I'll keep that in mind

[emmaemeh2011]

haha nope the boys are not twins and aren't related at all ,
and oh that's a good idea for a cover thanks

[emmaemeh2011]

I don't mind the critisism and thank you for saying you'll check it out
yeah I'll definitely fix the colors of the title , I was more fixated on the characters so i didn't really pay attention to it