@Aeneas1
I read the entire first episode of Nixvir, and here's what I thought:
It's apparently a fantasy series taking place in a world of sentient snowmen who have like a Medieval England-ish kind of social structure (complete with Medeival English), which is a fascinating concept. You seem to have put a lot of thought and effort into your lore, and I like that a lot.
I'm not gonna lie, though, I did have some trouble following along with the overall plot since there was so much going on, but your story seems to be leading somewhere interesting. There are sentient snowmen, mystical creatures, The Multiverse, and a ton of other things as well. And I even noticed you made a diagram detailing the social structure of one of the civilizations in your world at the end of your first episode.
I may not have comprehended all of it, but you obviously have put a lot of effort into this, and that's great. Keep going, dude.
