I'll rate your comic/novel cover

[Krysteena]

[Krysteena]

Load this in a bigger format I can hardly see it! Bu tit looks good!?

[Paul_Tromba]

5/5
This is perfection. The simplistic design, the photo of the irl moon, the amazing font for the title, and the eye balancing between hatred and mercy is perfect. The cloud kind of looks like Jabba the Hutt's tail but I'll let it slide.

[Paul_Tromba]

Thank you very much!

[shriraa.sha]

Here's the cover! And this is the banner!

[misfitcrew04]

Here's mine!

[misfitcrew04]

We always seem to be right next to each other in every forums thread!

[shriraa.sha]

Got that right haha

[MK_Wizard]

I appreciate the honesty. I drew inspiration from classic manga covers that had a lot of free space on them, but maybe that did not entirely translated quite right here.

PS: Congratulations on your new adventure!

[Paul_Tromba]

Thank you! It is really no big deal with the free space. I hope it helps.

[Paul_Tromba]

5/5
The framing, lighting, focal points, and title font/placement are so good. Your name is well placed, and the cover draws intrigue. Well done!

[Paul_Tromba]

4.9/5
Everything is so well done. The background is immaculate and the focus is centered on the MC(I assume) and the shadow looming over. My only consideration is the size of the title and your name. The font is good but the sizing is a bit small as I can barely make out your name. Take a bit more pride in what you have created.

[Paul_Tromba]

3.5/5
The title and logo are great! Any graphic designer would be proud. You could make that the banner, perhaps? Not sure where the focus is supposed to be tbh. Your name is a bit hard to make out but the lighting and use of space is great.

[kris_starlight]

Curious to know your thoughts.

[Amalockh1]

This was an experimental comic I made back then in the year 2014:

[LunarScyphozoa]

Curious to know what you think of mine!

[jwabeasley]

and getting married.

CONGRATULATIONS! Welcome to the team! And definitely prioritize your RL over this one.

[Paul_Tromba]

Thank you! I am really loving life right now. Glad to be a married man.

[Paul_Tromba]

4.7/5
The title, font, style, and color palette are great. There is little to no wasted space so good job there. The tiny details stand out a lot. The lighting and color saturation is a bit daunting for myself but otherwise, it is good.

[Paul_Tromba]

3/5
I see what you mean. The art is good and the character placement is well done. The font is pretty good for the top but could probably take up more space, unless you wanted to put your name up there with the NO. 32. How does, "Oriflamme's NO. 32 After The Revolution," sound? Maybe not? The colors of black, white, Grey, and red are pretty solid choices so keep with that. The bottom font is a bit rough, though gives the appeal of spray paint. The empty space at the bottom could be filled by making the word revolution bigger, or perhaps by adding your name. Fire or smoke could also be used as a filler as it would fit with your theme. Either way, I think it is pretty good outside what you were asking about.