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I agree that Roy and Angel have pretty simplistic similarities 🤣 I always knew that was the case but it was more obvious when I still was illustrating them. Getting a talented artist to help me definitely set them apart :grin: although I wish I could show you the other characters so that you know that their hairstyles all are NOT that similar 🤣🤣 it's just a coincidence that we did these guys first. I do plan to share all the illustrations once they're done anyways.

As for the type of story, it's tilted Individuality, so perhaps the clothing makes a bit more sense since they are all supposed to come off as very unique :grin: as for the setting, they are just teenagers in a school for superhumans. Pretty basic sounding but I promise there is a unique spin to it 🤣

Alrighty there's a lot to review to I'll briefly speak my mind about them

@Inspector_Spinda your cast is very diverse and I like how you can tell who is who just by their body shapes and hair. I must also praise you for really having their faces stand out from each other.

@O-1-D in terms of colour your cast looks good and none of their colours conflict with each other in their designs. I do think aside from Dr. Browner and Fife their faces look the same, they have the same muzzle size and their eyes are very similar too so they suffer from same face syndrome a little bit in my opinion

@Tanidreams for a character cast based on mushrooms I must say you did a great job. I especially like Sniffles xd
I do think the purple on Tufts is a little hard to see next to the dark green but that may just be me

@R.n.P I like how your main character isn't a cute anime/manga protagonist and has some more realistic features, also I like his hairstyle

@Schwarze_Neko I also like her hairstyle (though that may just be me because I like short haired girls :sweat_smile:)
Also the wrappings around her arms are a nice touch

Thank you for the compliments on the character
would it be too much to also ask for honest feedback as well please, so if there's something i can improve on i can do it later on down the road( i basically wanted to hear good news first, that's why i asked for feedback with love first, hope its not a problem for you)

Thanks for the feedback, to be honest this probably wasn't the best example of the characters I could have given, it's just that the ref sheets I made for them are at least 6 months old and I didn't wanna show that cause tbh I'm kind of embarrassed about them :sweat_smile:

((I'll do this in parts, will get to the others later since I'm at work

@alliascompany at first glance your characters are distinguishable enough to tell them apart. But they suffer from same face syndrome a bit due to them having the same noses and mouth (this is more of a problem with the younger characters as opposed to the older ones.)

@R.n.P I honestly think your characters are decently good designed, especially the male ones. I must confess though that I thought the left guy in the last picture was wearing a speedo because it looked like he had hairy legs, but then I saw those were pants with dots on them. Perhaps you can make those dots a bit bigger?

Thanks for the feedback!

Should have probably mentioned that they're all related and that was intentional XD

Though admittedly my noses don't really vary that much haha. Should experiment with that more

Yh of course i can, I'll keep it in mind when I'm drawing my characters in certain outifts.
I'm glad my character designs were really good for you

Hey, this is a cool thread! I'll include this guy. Could you review this guy? If you want to. But you don't have to. :slight_smile: And i you do review him, I'm looking for honest feedback.