You write down things how they are without sugarcoating it. That’s probably important since you’re writing about a serious topic.
i guess you could say that
Maybe you can give this a look over and see what you think.
The dialogue is natural, the characters are relatable, your blurb nicely summarizes the series, and I like the pacing
Thanks. Though I have been thinking of reworking the series a little bit.
I'm almost reaching the milestone XD
Your artstyle doesn't use normal lines, which is something I like seeing. Another comic that doesn't use normal lines is "Safely Endangered." Also, your comic is relatable. And I like your title. Alliteration in titles is really nice in my opinion.
It's always good to hear nice comments ^^ I'll leave my comic here
I like the absence of color. This seems to me to not be a particularly happy environment, so the absence of color is a nice touch. Also, your comic's blurb mentions some famous history, which caught my attention.
I am new to the group I really need a good critique if you can I would appreciate it so much my art gets better with each chapter i am new to digital art https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/lions-den-/list?title_no=371341
I like the bland colors. It helps the comic show that the main character is in a bad place right now. Also, the lines are neat. And the story seems pretty cool. I'm going to rate you a ten because why not.
Congrats and thanks
if you're still open in replying! here's mine hehe
It's easily binge-able; the comics are short and there are a lot of them. And it lives up to the blurb. Plus, it's traditionally drawn which is something refreshing.
Hello!!! You don’t need to reply on mine if u still feel uncomfortable but just wanted to take part
Your art looks quite professional, you inform us on what kind of family Nayla lives with, and your title sounds badass.
Your art looks very good, you give us a sense of where the character are, the dialogue seems pretty natural, and "Sarimanok" is a cool name.
You start off with something pretty innocent, but then you go straight into murder which is offsetting and will probably get readers hooked. Unless they're like me and feel uncomfortable watching people die. Also, your art is really good and that helps out with the offsetting thing.
Thanks so much -
I like your character too
