I'm new, critique my work?

[AndrewSutton]

I have had good feedback so far from a few but it would be helpful to have some more insight/views and subs.

Turnipman: https://tapastic.com/episode/418969
Comedy series about a pun-loving super turnip that has to defeat an evil sausage to save the town (on-going)

Bonus Friday's: https://tapastic.com/episode/420518
Okay, so this is a random day. Sometimes it's artwork and sometimes it's a comic etc.
Plus, this one is always colour

Gangster mice: https://tapastic.com/series/Gangster-mice
This one is just getting going but it's semi-comedy/serious about a group of mice that live in a mansion owned by the mafia.

So yeah, tell me what you think!

ps. and you know, share and sub is you like it!

[acealmansoori]

I wish I could critique your work, but i'm the last person to. You'll probably ruin it more with my critique xDDD so i'll give you awesome supporting words

"you can do it and stuff, conquer the world" - Ace

[AndrewSutton]

Ha! lol

well, take a look and see if you like it XD

[Nyamesis]

Heyyy welcome I'm also new here

As for a bit of critique-
I think you've already got a pretty consistent style going on so thats a good thing.
I guess the biggest thing that bothers me is the shading. Maybe you can try out selecting the different shapes and then shading them instead of merely using a softbrush everywhere. I would like to see some tasty sharp edges in your shading that would really help level up the style ^^

anyway good luck drawing, I'm also gonna try and crank out some comics C:

[AndrewSutton]

Thanks for the reply!

Are you referring to all my comics or just turnipman?

[Nyamesis]

oh yes I only looked at turnipan .u. so disregard that comment for the other two! sorry ^^

[AndrewSutton]

lol no worries.

Turnipman will be coloured like the bonus friday stuff when the series is complete