I'm trying an experiment, an unfunny comedy comics

afisa.wavinflier 2018-04-11 22:51:49 UTC #1

Thats the idea, an unfunny comedy comics. The name is NOT FUNNY AT ALL. I do not know where this is going to lead me, but I would like a feedback ...

This is the first story:

Critics and sugestions are welcome.

Thanks a lot.

mikemacdee 2018-04-11 22:56:33 UTC #2

Just make your comic like anything on Adult Swim.

DiegoPalacios 2018-04-11 23:29:21 UTC #3

These 2 links may help you with your attempt at "not being funny". The one about anti-humor shows different approaches and examples of the art of replacing a punchline with something non-humorous or serious. And the one about cringe comedy teaches about making situations or your audience feel awkward for comedic effect. It also has examples.

crocuta 2018-04-16 03:59:05 UTC #4

Your comedy has many layers, i hope to achieve enlightenment one day and truly understand ^^