I can do a quick review - and it's too soon for an in-depth review anyway, with just a prologue and one scene. My main wheelhouse is in comics, so it's a bit weird for me to do a review that can't talk about the art.
It's solid so far, I don't have any major issues with it. Badger is a bounty hunter in not-Night City. I appreciate that it isn't an isekai. You did a good job keeping pleasantries out and keeping within the characterization consistent.
There are a couple of changes you should consider making - first, please put an extra space between paragraphs or an indent on new paragraphs. It'll help avoid confusion as the reader scans the page. You could also benefit from taking a second editing pass where you focus on making your descriptions more evocative without making them longer.
I hope you continue to lean into the noir attitude, noir is the inspiration for most true cyberpunk stories. The follow through and finishing of a story is much harder than starting it, so don't get discouraged when the grind sets in! May you have great success with this story!
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