Hello there everyone!
I'm looking for feedback/critique for my and my sister's mutual comic + my sister's solo works.
Feedback of all kind is welcome, positive or negative, as long as it's constructive: first impressions, ways to improve, thoughts on dialogue, story, pacing...what ever comes to your mind!
It can be as short as "The artstyle doesn't interest me", or very detailed.
First is our mutual comic, Aarrevaara, been at Tapas since Feb 2016, 174 subscribers.
Changing updating schedule helped A LOT at gaining subscribers.
For 3 years we uploaded 1 chapter/month and got 100 subsribers. In 2019 we started to update 1 page/week and reached 174 subsribers. So clearly the regular updates matter!
We also put the comic to Webtoons in 2019 and gained 90 subscribers. Slightly more than in Tapas c: In Webtoons readers also commented and gave likes a lot.
But in both Webtoons and Tapas the earliest chapters have most likes and views but as the story goes on, views and likes go down.
Here are my sister's solo works. She does the story and art by herself, but I help by reading the manuscripts and pointing out the parts that don't work out.
Insect Spirit
been at Tapas since June 2018, 20 subscribers
Spell
been at Tapas since June 2018, 8 subscribers
Abandoned House
been at Tapas since Feb 2019, 15 subscribers
Growing Forest
been at Tapas since Nov 2018, 7 subscribers
So we'd like to know, is there any problems with the comics - like storytelling, art style or something - since our other social medias are quite quiet too - no comments or that many followers. Or is it just that people just haven't found the comics yet.
Thank you for your time!