Here’s the story.
I’ve posted the first four chapters of my Comic on webtoon and tapas, and after getting it in front of some eyeballs other than my own and listening to some feedback, I’ve realized that this whole first arc has literally nothing to do with the plot. It doesn’t introduce the main conflict and we have no idea why the main character is doing the things she’s doing. All we have are questions And no one is going to waste their time waiting for the answers. There’s no reason for people to continue reading.
And here’s the kicker. None of this story essential information is conveyed in the first four chapters, right? Well, it’s not gonna be conveyed until the next three chapters come out!! That ain’t right!
So,
Is it totally amateur and unethical to essentially reboot my story even though it’s only been out a week? (i have four subs btw).
I think I already know the answer to that question... but the more I think about it, the more convinced I am that I should cut the crap and get right to the meat of the story.
Still, I’d love to know your thoughts or hear your story if you went through something similar.
Feeling pretty confused and bummed out.
Edit: after hearing all this sound advice and sitting with the decision to reboot for a bit, I think the play I’m going to make is just to keep going with what I have. I mean, I’m so new at this I’m bound to make 50 more mistakes by the time the credits roll - I think I’m going to just push through. This is a learning experience after all!
Thank you everyone for replying!