Is the first chapter of my novel too dark? Can you check out the first chapter and let me know if it is off putting. Only 10% of people who go on to read past the first chapter. Should I rewrite it or just remove it?
Your first chapter is interesting and beautifully written. However, you can tag it Mature Rating for certain themes and violence
I already subbed to your work.
Here, feel free to check out my Adventure Fantasy, Samsara Through Time
I just subscribed to yours as well
