What? 
I'd say this is only understandable if someone knows the game. At the very least, I have no idea what the last update is supposed to mean. Is that a cardboard box that had holes poked into it with a pool of blood below it? I have no idea why there are holes, why there's blood and what the 'this' in 'this would work' is supposed to mean.
Same for episode 13. I can relate to episode 12 even though I don't know that game either but I guess it's a common problem in different games.
For the 13. and 14. episode, I'd say that my main problem is that I don't have an initial situation. There's just something that somehow happened but I don't know how or why. In episode 12 I had that: First I saw the character taking aim and then I saw the result so I understood what was going on.