I think your writing style is great! It gives enough detail for the reader to be able to imagine the scenes, but not too much where it can get overwhelming! The plot for your stories are also well-thought-out and it shows in your stories!
The only nitpick that I could find was that I noticed you tend to switch between past and present tense throughout your stories, which can be confusing and a bit hard to read for the audience! Overall, I think they're great stories and you just probably need to proofread for the grammar errors that I mentioned!
Are you planning on publishing these stories on Tapas?