Jam Comic Part 2 (for writers & artists)

[Puck]

Here is the second part of the group collaboration jam comic and here are the rules:

The idea behind the collaboration / jam comic is to give an opportunity to try out to work
writers if their scripts work, how it is to work with an artist and the other way around

Writers:
Upload your script, it can be a 3 panel story or a 40 panel story or whatever you come
up with, but have in mind that the artists who will draw it can draw it,
You can upload some ideas for the characters, character sheets, pictures how
you want the characters to look like, mood pictures

Artists:
You can pick a story you like and when it´s done you can upload it to the topic.
Different artists can draw the same comic. 2 artists can draw a comic together
etc

If you have any questions, let us know.

Looking forward to the first scripts

[Lahin]

Do I upload it here? (Assuming I can come up with something)

[Puck]

Yes, everything gets uploaded to the topic, the scripts and the comics

[WistyWrites]

Here’s some type of script—to get us going I guess. Look, I was uninspired and wanted to participate!

Person A: I’m so absolutely famous, oh my!

Person B: I’ve literally never seen you in my life.

Person A: Look, that’s me in a cat food commercial!

Person B: That looks nothing like you.

Person A: Ooh, and my debut as a fashion model!

Person B: Again, looks like someone completely different.

Person A: My job as an actress, see?

Person B: Now you’re being ridiculous.

[sorible]

hooray! thank you for this puck!

[Puck]

Good job and I love that it´s simple and short enough to get started

[Puck]

thank you, I love action

[Lahin]

[Two people on a couch, sitting, watching tv, tv says "Joke"]

A: Haha
B: (Doesn't say anything)
A: Hihi
B:(...)
A: Huhu
B:Uh...
A: Hihi
B: Hey, the joke was over 2 minutes ago...
A: Hoho
B: Are you ok?
A: H aeiou h aeiou
B: (Walks away) Alright, I'm out.

[Legendofgenii]

I hope this works. I had to chop it up a bit.

I read 'cat' and went from there. Lol!

[diestreve319]

I've made two scripts. It's up to the artist which script to choose.
So here we go:

1st Script:

(Eloisa and Mharibelle are in class and busy writing messages on a leaf shaped sticky note.)

Panel 1: Excited, they both place their leaf paper underneath the tables, trying to hide their giggles.

Panel 2: Class didn't end yet, and the both of them were busy talking.

Panel 3: Eloisa: Hope he's cute

Panel 4: Mharibelle: Hope he's tall.

Panel 5: Eloisa and Mharibelle: (giggling)

Panel 6: Teacher: Eloisa and Mharibelle, keep quiet!

2nd Script:

(It's winter, and it's Christmas. Martha (the main character) is staring outside through the window of their Mini Gift Shop. She's the one narrating the story. She's in the cashier area looking at the customers entering the shop.)

Panel 1: As soon as the wind chimes rang, the door of our shop opened.
(Show the wind chimes rang as a customer entered the shop)

Panel 2: Outside our shop were drizzles of snowflakes dripping, making everything shimmering white.
(Show snowflakes falling)

Panel 3: A young man entered the shop. The first thing I noticed was his bright eyes of blue, almost aqua.
(Show a handsome young man with blonde curly hair and blue eyes almost aqua color just entering the shop)

Panel 4: The young man smiled at me.
(Show him smile at Martha. Martha has olive skin and dark hair)

Panel 5: Just right about I was to smile back, my mom, who just went out of the baking area behind us, greeted him.
(The mom has a kind face. Her age is around 50)

Panel 6: Mom: Oh, finally you’re here, William! How’s your trip? Are you tired? Do you need anything? A coffee? A cake?

Panel 7: William: It’s okay. Thank you for being so kind.

Panel 8: Mom: This is my daughter, Martha.

Panel 9: William reached out his hand for a handshake.
William: Hi, Martha.

[EncryptedWriting]

Not going to be nit picky but I think things are better without a script. That's the fun of it, seeing what everyone comes up with.

[WistyWrites]

Ahh this is a masterpiece! Tbh I didn’t think anyone would do the script I made.

[SurvivALIST]

If you people don't mind sad and unexpected stories, here's the script:

THE LAST THREE PATS

Written by SurvivALIST
Thankfully drawn by _________

[Imagine this scene: A cat looking up at the person in the bed.]

Panel 1: (Closeup on the impatient cat's face as if looking up and demanding something) Meeoww!

Panel 2: (An old withered right hand with a defined long-sleeve of a woman's nightgown is placed on the cat's head)

Panel 3: (The frail hand falls off the cat's head. The cat looks surprised.)

Panel 4: (The cat huffs and puffs in indignation then meows irritably) Meeoww!!

Panel 5: (Frail right hand returns once again on the cat's head)

Panel 6: (The hand falls off once again)

Panel 7: (This time, the cat is more demanding and meows loudly or wildly) Meeoww!!!

Panel 8: (Closeup on the frail hand moving to the left of the panel)

Panel 9: (The hand is on the cat's head and patting the head's fur. The cat looks proud of being patted.)

Panel 10: (The hand falls off and becomes lifeless)

Panel 11: (Cat becomes angry because the pats weren't continuous)

Panel 12: (Full shot of cat's back figure. Cat shakes the frail hand hanging from the bed w/ its two paws.)

Panel 13: (Cat stops shaking the hand)

Panel 14: (Cat slaps the hand with its right paw)

Panel 15: (Cat looks up to the bed) Meow?

Panel 16: (Cat jumps onto the tall bed)

Panel 17: (The bedsheets are ruffled by the cat because it was trying to wake up the old lady. The lifeless hand is also disturbed) Meeoww!!!

Panel 18: (CU on the lifeless arm that being disturbed and add speech balloon) Meeoww!!!

Panel 19: (Extreme CU on the lifeless arm still being disturbed)

Panel 20: (Black background with the title) THE LAST THREE PATS

[SurvivALIST]

to give an opportunity to try out to workwriters if their scripts work

I do need this. Please comment to tell me if my script worked or was not understandable. I'm that wordy.

If the problem is not the script, maybe it's the title. I guess? TY

[Puck]

WOOOW!
Why are you so good?
Seriously this is great in every way and you have been so fast

[Puck]

We can have some jams, the other one is panel by panel.
I do the 24 hours comic day once a year, that´s a fun challenge too

[Puck]

I think it´s a great script and I personally like good desprictions in a script

[SurvivALIST]

Thanks but I'm still an amateur. Still thanks.

[Legendofgenii]

Thank you for this thread. This was such good practice for me.

I am the slowest person in the world, so to draw this in one evening was a huge challenge - and (fuelled by tea) I did it!

The cats were great fun to draw.

Spectre is a bit creepy, but he is a Bond villain I guess.

[DanielRKM]

And DANG did you rock it!