So Elisa and me just finished our first story. It's 38 pages of my boy detective duo kicking supernatural butt, taking names and making some friends while they're at it.
It's a self-contained story, so if any of you have a few minutes to kill, shouldn't take more than that to binge it.
Not really looking for a critique. I can sort of see what needs working on, like the pacing and dialogue..
(Still, if something else jumps out as being total crap, yeah, let me know)
What I would like to know is if, after reading this one, you'd be tempted to check out the next one, or rather, give it a pass.
To be honest, the reason I chose this format is so I wouldn't be wasting too much time doing something I might suck at.
So would you read the next story in this series ?