Hey, thanks for doing this @Im_moron! Most artists/writers are starved for feedback on their work. Good luck getting through it all. I'll try and help out a little bit because @cosmicfunnies really grabbed my attention. I read 10 episodes for this review.
- love this art style!!! so cute! I'd be careful about copyright issues though. Your art is highly reminiscent of CrashCourse
- It feels like this kind of comic is targeted towards younger audiences, but right out of the gate I can see how this could be confusing for someone who doesn't already have a science background. Try explaining things more visually, and pair it with your text. I can see that you get better at this in later chapters. Good job!
- I'd recommend using vector graphics, or using higher resolution images. Some of your pages have artifacts, and while its not too noticeable, it makes some colors look a little bit gross, and gives shapes a halo effect.
All in all it's a fun read, and anything that makes science a little easier to understand gets a recommendation from me!
aaaand here's my work:
It's only got 2 chapters so far, which is roughly 35 pages. I've tagged it as a romance, but it's got plenty of elements from Science fiction, action, adventure, and drama. I wouldn't call it a horror, but I there are definitely some serious themes at play, maybe some psychological horror.
Hope you enjoy it!