Hello! I've recently finished my first variation of a comic script that will contain no dialogue and I was hoping to get feedback on characterization and pacing. I've been wanting to make a silent comic for a while and I've finally gained enough motivation to write one out!
It's a medieval romance between a prince put into an arrange marriage and a bard he runs into after sneaking out one day. The script is 33 pages long, but my descriptions are super brief as I'm acting as the comic's artist and don't need to over explain anything. The comic will be 137 pages long.
I may also need somebody to look over the sketched pages when I'm done finalizing the script to make sure things are clear as to what's going on without much prior knowledge of what's going on in the script!
If you're interested in helping please feel free to comment! My preferred method of communication would be through discord, but if you would like to discuss this anywhere else feel free to tell me!
Thank you for your time!
