I’ve already posted this comic a couple of times, but not in such a general forum before.
Just looking for criticism, mainly on the art. Anything I can improve on.
Looks fun. I would enjoy a little more detail in the drawings. I really enjoy the colors and the characters so far. Keep it up!
I would definitely practice detail and movement. But other words, your colors are awesome and the character's personalities show up well. Just keep practicing and you'll start improving.
Hi. I'd suggest to work more on backgrounds, at first place.The second thing which can be improved is girl's poses. Particularly, her heads incline on the first few pictures seems very unnatural for me.Good luck with your work!
Gotta say, super adorable. Your style communicates it's charm very efficiently.
