Looking for feedback :D

[KET]

Trying to get back into making comics after a long hiatus. Wanted to do something in a more webcomic format too. it's an occult detective comic with my own twist. hope you guys find the time to check it out

Jack Omens | Tapas

[chocolatteboss]

Hi. Nice artstyle I love it.

The fist chapter doesn't have much that could pull in a reader really. Nothing interesting happened. I see from the description that your story includes supernatural stuff which is a great idea that will attract viewers. I think we should have seen a glimpse of that in the first few images. So that we know what we are signing up for.

Don't let your chapters be normal. Be unique.

[chocolatteboss]

I know this is where the story starts.... In this case you could have had the first episode be flashback of the lady in the snow doing sth supernatural first and then make this the second episode now that we know what the problem is.

But that's just a suggestion. You know your story better.

[LT1986]

The art work is good. The first episode leaves some suspense. The story that the guy is about to tell about the lady in the snow appears to be the lady that was shown in the beginning of the episode. I'll try to check back in after a few uploads to see what happens. Right now, I don't have much information to comment on.

[KET]

True. I plan to remedy that om the coming pages. Give more info and context. I wanted to set things up a bit but I guess theres a lot of stuff im missing. Thanks for the feedback!

[KET]

I wanna go for something suspenseful and thrilling cuz my main inspiration is those hard boiled detective comics. 1st upload is a bit short because im gauging how much i should put in one. Ill try adding more so even if it might end up in a cliffhanger, readers still get that satisfaction