Looking for feedback on my spooky comic!

woah-man 2018-10-07 19:45:15 UTC #1

Actually not specifically for Halloween, but what better a time to write a comic about a Necromancer and a hat stealing ghost?

Eventually I hope to print it, but I wanted to post it online to get people's opinions and gather some interested readers!

Let me know what you think. Here are the first two pages, I'll be adding more in the days to come. Thank you!

punkarsenic 2018-10-07 20:46:43 UTC #2

oooooooh i really like your shading and use of colour. im curious to see where this goes!

woah-man 2018-10-07 20:58:23 UTC #3

Thank you! It's been a long time since I've done a full color comic, it's both way more annoying and way more fun than doing a black and white one.

Harmony-S-S 2018-10-08 15:04:50 UTC #4

Bookmarked post...Coming back to read it!

woah-man 2018-10-09 04:37:41 UTC #5

Woohoo, finally finished page 3! Took me ages since I got sick in the middle of it, and I was being super picky with the colors! But I'm happy with how it turned out. My friend said it looks like 'Animal Crossing levels of comfy', and I think I can live with that! Gotta make it look all innocent and cozy before the shit hits the fan. Let me know what you think!!

woah-man 2018-10-24 04:15:20 UTC #6

Page 4 is up - I'm sort of struggling with the speech bubbles. I don't know, I feel like they look a little too manufactured compared to the rest (because I used the auto bubble tools on Clip Studio ahaha) but I also don't like it when I hand draw them. Quite a predicament!