Looking for feedback on my webcomic

[Lucca_Vendramel]

Hey there! I have a sci-fi fantasy webcomic about a girl named Cozmata and her caretakers, that get tangled in rescuing one of their peers after an indirect attack from a shadowy organization. It is heavily based on Steven Universe, so if you like it, might be a nice comic for you!
I am looking for some feedback on how to improve it and how to make it more appealing to everyone. If you could read it and give me some feedback, I'd greatly appreciate it!

[Everdream: Stars Hold no Boundaries](https://tapas.io/series/Everdream-Stars-Hold-no-Boundaries)

[GravityBreakCat]

Steven Universe is my favorite show, so I'll definitely check this out! Can't promise any feedback, but if I think of something I'll let you know

[fleohr]

• Better use one font and same size for the text, too many can make your comic hard to read

• Pay atention on the text hitting the border

• Make your text align to center

• If the character has a long speech, cut it in sentences and make another speech bubble for the next sentence

• Try new shapes and sizes for the panels, to make it look more dynamic

And check this guide:

Creator's Guide to Tapastic | Tapas

It helped me a lot to make my comics look more neat

Good luck with your comic!

[Lucca_Vendramel]

Thanks a lot. Could you elaborate more on "aligning the text to center", please?
Also, I wanted to make each character have a different font, like in Undertale. What's your opinion on that?

[DeformedSunflower]

I hope you don't mind me taking the liberty to answer your questions:

-Aligning text to centre: basically, position the text in a way so that they're symmetrical on both sides, rather than flushed to one side. Let me give you an example:

See the difference? Sure, there's nothing wrong with left alignment text, but it just looks much neater when you align it in the centre.

-Different fonts: Ehhh...I don't think this is a good idea. Too many different fonts may lead to confusion instead of interesting format. I suggest you rather decide on maybe three-four default fonts, then switch between them according to the mood of the character (normal, ecstatic, furious, and sad).

I'll still stick to the 'normal' font for most of the time though, and use the more 'unique' fonts very sparingly.

[Lucca_Vendramel]

Thanks for your elaboration on alignment and the time you took to explain this stuff. I'm most likely gonna follow your advice and make it only one font. I'm just afraid it will feel pretty awkward if I just change it on the third chapter or even worse; halfway through. Do you think I should proceed?

[caelesc]

People change the art style of their comics, the direction of reading, speech bubbles and also fonts for their comics all the time!
The more you read and research other comics the more you learn new things. It's only normal to implement your new found knowledge. So I personally say you should change the font sooner rather than later. : )

[Lucca_Vendramel]

Sounds about right. Thank you, guys! I'll change all those things as soon as I start chapter 3.