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Aug 2018

Hello, I'm new here, but I post a lot
today I'm looking for feedbacks to my comic, I'm open to criticism in good way also I would feedback your comics. here is mine.
gender: fantasy, comedy and science fiction.

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    Aug '18
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    Aug '18
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Hi there and welcome ^^ well there aren't many pages to give a proper critique but I try my best.

To me it looks really interesting even though I usually preffer colored pages. But the way you use patterns and shadings is very nice and makes the comic well readable. Also your clean lines are helping. Sometimes they are a little overlaping but it's not much it isn't disturbing.

As said, the comic is too short to make a propper critique on the story. Still, this start is funy and made me interested in what happens further ^^ especially that last part got me hooked. sooo you got yourself a new reader.^^

thank you very much for your criticism! :grin: I hope to update soon to get a critique of the story in general.

Welcome!! Awww, look at those huge adorable eyes. The whole comic looks very professional, even if it is not distributed in vertical style it is very easy to read on the mobile, the size of the font is great! I can see some grammatical errors that are not that bad. I'm not a native speaker either, but they are noticeable. Ahora, veo que hablas español y que tienes mucha experiencia con tus comic y hasta tienes volùmenes impresos!! Se nota mucho que tienes un estilo ya pulido. Muchas felicidades, me suscribo :slight_smile: Cualquier cosa ando en el foro o en mi perfil! Saludos!

Thanks! hahaha, you are like the FBI! (que bueno ver mas latinos por aca)

Bueno, es que tu comic tiene el link al Face...tambièn se donde vives y estoy afuera de tu casa ಠ_ಠ. jajajajajaja. Mucho exito! :slight_smile: