Hi there and welcome ^^ well there aren't many pages to give a proper critique but I try my best.
To me it looks really interesting even though I usually preffer colored pages. But the way you use patterns and shadings is very nice and makes the comic well readable. Also your clean lines are helping. Sometimes they are a little overlaping but it's not much it isn't disturbing.
As said, the comic is too short to make a propper critique on the story. Still, this start is funy and made me interested in what happens further ^^ especially that last part got me hooked. sooo you got yourself a new reader.^^
