Hello !
I have mustered up the courage to create my first webcomic and hoping to get some feedback, even though I only have 4 pages up currently.
I’m hoping to strike a good first impression with these pages, but wondering of others opinions on it.
It’s a very personal story of events that has happened to me, it would mean a lot to me for others to give me feedback.
I honestly really like this so far. The cute simplistic style contrasts with the dark subject matter and that makes it really stand out. I'm curious to read more and see where it goes.
Also I hope you're okay now <3
Thank you so much for your feedback !
Thank you also for your concern, I am okay for the most part haha
I like it, the simple art style and that it´s an autobiography, that way you´ll never run out of ideas.I think you will learn a lot when you continue the comic
I love the art style.Will it be in Black & white always?
Hello @IKI,I was really struck by your comic and I have subscribed to it . I saw you mention that there are four pages up currently, but I can only find the very first one. Please forgive me if I misunderstood o: !I really love it so far, it has a very powerful start, which leads me to wanting to know more. Keep up the amazing work . I hope you're doing better than you were (judging by the first page of the comic)!
I hope I can learn much from this
Thank you for your kind words !
Yes, I’m planning on leaving it black and white
Good pacing, appealing character design, and so far a sensitive approach to a sensitive subject.
Me like.
Thank you so much for subscribing !
Oh, yes ! By 4 pages I meant one chapter with 4 pages only currently
Thank you for your feed back !
Yes, I am okay for the most part now
I like it. I also like the fact that you include a personal story in it. There should be more of these comics. I subscribe and see how your comic develops.
I agree with this.Even my slice of life is based on my conversations with my friend