I’m not good at giving reviews but I’ll give it a shot.
Gotta say I really love the characters, especially that protagonist, so adorbs. I don’t feel it’s the most original story but I feel it’s well done which is most important​
The art is pretty good as far as the characters. The action scenes with the effects are great! And overall I found it to be a veeery enjoyable read:3 I’m looking forward to more​
However you REALLY need to work on some of those backgrounds. Even if you don’t want to draw a background you need to use less white. I found that even if you just put some gray areas in the background it really helps the scene. Your comic deserves some good backgrounds man:3 I don’t really like how only the eyes have colored:/ it’s really just a distraction and takes from the mood of the story.
I think you paneling could be better. There’s a lot of space between them and the lines around them are very thick. Make the lines thinner and vary the spacing between panels. I see that you are doing this mostly traditionally but I would strongly recommend you put this into vertical format. I switched and I feel it really helped my story There are ways of doing it with traditional lineart, so I would recommend you try it out.
...And if you maybe want to return the favor and review my webcomic