Hey! I like what I've read so far. Pretty funny stuff.
The biggest critique I have would be on your dialogue and how text is written out inside of your speech balloons.
You seem to write it all out in one long chunk, I'd suggest stacking it with one or two words on top, and ending with one or two on the bottom. Here's an example from mine. (Even though I still need a lot of work on my own, I can at least give you a little direction.)
I'd also suggest trying to increase your font size. It's kinda hard to read on mobile. Of course this means you might need to trim some words and do a little rewriting to make it work.
But I like what you have so far. I'll be subbing soon.