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Aug 2024

In my novel, there is a part where the main character sings the theme song of the otome game she is in. I am not a lyric writer, so if anyone can point me the way to writing lyrics or know someone who can write lyrics, please let me know. I want the song to be upbeat and K-popish. It must include these words in the song somewhere. (Note my non-existent rhyming sense)

Open up your heart, listen to the melody.
It is within the soul and all around
It never changes within yourself
Even through time
Key of Fortune Love
Listen to the melody. Let your heart soar. Let it radiate within your soul
Key of Fortune Love
Love
love
True Love is the key.
You got to make your move
Listen to your soul
Release the Love
Love
Love
Till the world is whole!
Listen to the melody. Let your heart soar. Let it radiate within your soul
Key of Fortune Love
love
love
True Love is the key.

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(Open up your heart, listen to the (this?) melody. x12
It is within the soul and all around (me) x 6 or (Within the soul and all around you see)x10
It never changes within yourself (maybe say this like yours-ove to make it rhyme with love and stretch it out to be x10)
Even through time
Key of Fortune Love
Listen to the melody. Let your heart soar. Let it radiate within your soul
Key of Fortune Love
Love
love
True Love is the key.
You got to make your move
Listen to your soul
Release the Love
Love
Love
Till the world is whole!
Listen to the melody. ( Let it radiate within your so Let your heart soar.- This part could be sung at the same time or quieter) (like a dove?- this part louder and now it's x10 )
Key of Fortune Love
love
love
True Love is the key.

I'm half asleep and what I'm trying to say essentially is when you put words to music there are a certain amount of beats. That's why I'm counting things. If you can make all the words fit within the amount of beats or musical notes it'll work.

Also work on those rhymes. You're doing great. Listen to some k-pop while following along with the words to hopefully see what I mean. You can also watch some how to videos that will help. All of these are just suggestions and you don't have to take them of course. You got this.

I would use an already existing song and then sing the lyrics along with the
song. Then add words. ItĀ“s really easy to do it like that and after a while it
will feel like a fun puzzle.

I found an acoustic version of the song and used your lyrics to sing
along to it. I used the phrase "True love is the key" as a chorus.
The song could be called "True love"

Original song "Bite me" by Enhypen.

It's you and me in this world,
=Open up your heart
ė‚“ź²Œė”œ ė‹¤ģ‹œ ģ™€, tie me
=listen to the melody
ė‚  źµ¬ģ›ķ•  ź±°ė¼ė©“, just come kiss me
=It is with the soul
and bite me (oh, babe
=True love is the key

Sounds like a good idea, but I don't want to accidentally get sued for copyright. By the way, the song bite me was a nice listen. :hugging:

You will not get sued because you will not use the same melody or the same words like the original
song, so there is nothing to sue you for.

Writing songs over already existing songs or standard progressions is how most song lyrics get written.

9 days later

I made a few changes to the song using some of the suggestions in this post. Let me know how to make this song better.

Key of Fortune Love

Open up your heart, listen to this melody.
It is within the soul and all around you see
It never changes within yourself, so heavenly
Even through time
Key of Fortune Love
Listen to the melody. Let it radiate within your soul. Let your heart soar.
Key of Fortune Love
Love
love
True Love is the key.
Magic in the air we breathe
Hearts that dance and never grieve
Spirits high and free
You and me in fantasy
Stars that glow in our eyes
Never fear where love abides.
Key of Fortune Love
Listen to the melody. Let it radiate within your soul. Let your heart soar.
Key of Fortune Love
Love
love
True Love is the key.
You got to make your move
Listen to your soul
There is nothing to prove
When your love is whole
Release the Love
Love
Love
Till the world is whole!
Listen to the melody. Let it radiate within your soul. Let your heart soar.
Key of Fortune Love
love
love
True Love is the key.
The key
True love is the key
The key
True love is the key.

I used Suno.Ai to add music to the lyrics that I improved and it turned out pretty cool. I want others to hear it, but I have no idea how to upload it. Any ideas?