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Sep 2018

it would be a good idea if the comments wouldn't get deleted. maybe I should just disable them until I combine all of the pages, if I were to do it that way.

It's probably the writing. Your pacing is slowly being dragged. Like your're trying to extend what may already be obvious. And you're dialogue sort of gets muddled with your panel planning. You treat the conversations like movie scenes in terms of format rather than a comic.

could you maybe be more specific on that? I also plan ahead for the chapter I work on so I usually make things the way they are for a reason

Well it feels like your dragging your story a bit by focusing more on the characters rather than the stakes and plot points of the story. I understand that some stories have some banter between characters to add some character development or whatever reason. But you seem to focus on their interactions rather than explain what needs to happen. Now some stories do begin with having the characters interact (with the plot moving in the background). But in those cases, the interactions are appealing. I mean even Josie doesn't seem to have a clear goal in the story. Xenor's personality isn't clear. He's either cheery or boy scout serious. All of this dragged even further by weak dialogue.

And I plan ahead for my comic as well but i usually consider some things to just not be enough, or not work in terms of story telling. You said you don't know why you're losing activity, so you may wanna consider something you planned didn't work despite the reasoning.

I was planning on having more explanations in the after-next chapter since I know the earlier ones were pretty confusing

So you're saying the reasons i laid out, about slipping away from the plot, dialogue, and character development is all because it's a critical plot point?

no, it's because as I said the earlier episodes were pretty unclear, due to me not knowing what I was doing. I'm going to try to clear things up in upcoming chapters, which will involve explanations, less random dialogue and character development.

@ghostieblu hi! I literally just found your comic because you posted the link here. Which means you are not self promoting annoying or anything worthy of being called out! :slight_smile: There are some comics I have seen everywhere, over and over again and I can't blame them for wanting to show their work. Self-promote!
Now...your comic has such amazing quality and has a very distinctive style. I will love to read it and spam you with hearts and comments as soon as I finish my work.

I don't think the idea of making a new episode and delete is dirty to make notifications XD, but that doesn't work. Once I was making trial episodes and as soon as I deleted them Tapas deleted the notification and my comic disappeared from the fresh section. I guess they have that one figured out.

I was uploading my comic by updating the chapters too and my buddy Daknight is right, less people checked it out because they assume the "updates" are just some minor changes and they wait for the new chapter notification. So, maybe page per episode is not that bad.

thanks for the feedback. I think I've already resoled the issue though by making a post on my wall about it, and I'll put up a little reminder at the end of episodes that they'll still be updated

yeah I just assume all "updates" to chapters are art improvements or grammar fixes and literally ignore all of them.

I would stop that and just post new pages when you have new pages. Also everyone on mobile doesn't see the notice for update either...