TimCaloweh

You forced your plot way too much. A bunch of cliches were mashed in with no subtlety and poor use. The pacing dragged a bit in the beginning and then floored it once they entered the city. The twist came out of nowhere with little to no build up and poor use. The dialogue is bland and runs parallel…

May 11, '19

Need help coming up with a title!

-Sinister Games -Smiling Shadows -Playing in the Dark -The Midnight Bloom

May 9, '19

Villains who love their heroes

Now that i think about it i have quite a few villains planned to love the heroes. One of them is gonna be obsessed as well.

May 8, '19

Hi there advice needed

The descriptions are simple and are only a little hard to follow. Think about your tone. It will shape your setting, your dialogue and overall feel. If you have a direction, remain consistent. Always think about where your going. Keep writing then come back to us. You don't have to make it whole. …

May 7, '19

Unconventional Comics--Breaking the Mold

I'm new to commission drawing. Can I run a poll asking, out of context, how much you'd pay for these? (Yes, another one of THOSE threads.)

I put aliens in a WW2 setting. That was the only original idea i could think of. I guess i'm also trying to bring comedy into the f***ed up side of war and sci-fi. I ain't at all there yet but i'm still working at it.

May 7, '19

Pencil: $10 Line: $15 Color and hard shading: $15 Digital Paint w/o BG: $20 Digital Paint w/ BG: $25 Full Illustration: $40 BG: $30 ...at least.

May 5, '19

Comics set in the past?

1953 Alternate WW2 still ongoing.

May 3, '19

I'll sketch out your character. 5/5

Thank you for sketching. It's always amazing when people do these things. Great job.

May 2, '19

I'll sketch out your character. 5/5

Yeah sure. [image]

May 2, '19

I'll sketch out your character. 5/5

Okay, thanks for putting yourself out there. Can you please draw a small orc boy with big black hair flowing upward. A small single tusk popping out of the right side of his mouth, a small horn protruding from the center of his forehead. Eyes that show disdain and a cute nose.

Apr 27, '19

Cinematic screencap type of webcomic, recommendation?

Thanks for sharing this guys stuff. He's got a lot of good pieces. I'm not an expert at this stuff but i'd recommend getting a very good mind for colors. As long as you know what you're doing and how to do it with little delay, you could probably do it. However, i'd advise you to keep this comic of …

Apr 27, '19

A question of collaboration

I would take the story into consideration. Everything else only plays a part in my efforts if the story ain't worth it.

Apr 26, '19

What's your fav page you've made so far?

My brother laughed when i showed him the character i created in his likeness.

Apr 23, '19

Promo your Sci-fi comic/novel!

Apr 23, '19

Trying to think up a title for a mini comic series

-Shears! -Wooling Around -Cloppin' Things Up -Soft Shorts

Apr 22, '19

Do my views count? (Answered)

Yeah. I only found it weird that these views showed up cause i don't usually get views above 10 unless someone was feeling curious. So when i'm doing my rare self check up, the views coincidentally go up. It feels like this has happened two times before and at this rate i'm gonna write down the time…

Apr 22, '19

Is my art good enough to warrant a comic?

People have done a whole lot of good with a whole lot less. Granted people have also done worse with a whole lot as well, but I guess it all depends on the story. Either way, you can make a comic even if your art wasn't this good.

Apr 22, '19

Do my views count? (Answered)

This is just a quick question. I've noticed that when i'm reading my own comic to review my work while using my account(always), either someone is coincidentally viewing my comic or my views are being counted. If it's somebody else looking into my work, thanks for spending your time on my work, i ap…

Apr 20, '19

Do you have a comic about siblings? (..I do)

Thanks a lot. I appreciate the kind words.

Apr 19, '19

Common Sayings that Make You Crazy

Yeah, i've always theorized that the foresters coined the term into relevancy in those days but Shakespeare's work quietly changed the meaning to fighting methods with equally destructive methods. But yeah, it would be better if people understood they should try to prevent disaster rather than fig…

Apr 19, '19

Common Sayings that Make You Crazy

No it's about people retaliating from some form of action with a similar one. Creating a fuel reduced area is a firebreak designed to either slow the fire's momentum or keep the fire from reaching other areas so as to combat it in a fixed section. What you're referring to might be considered prepari…

Apr 19, '19

Common Sayings that Make You Crazy

"We'll fight fire with fire." And be left with ash?

Apr 19, '19

Do you have a comic about siblings? (..I do)

Two of the characters in The Rainy Days are based off of my brother and I. The story deals with brothers in arms, and will eventually cover siblings.

Apr 17, '19

Yeah you're probably right. Good luck with whatever.

Apr 17, '19

Sorry, i meant to write Superpowered Noir,but it's just an idea. Why are you looking to pinpoint your genre?

Apr 17, '19

Why don't you just add a subtitle on the thumbnail. "A Supernatural Noir-RIVER CITY"

Apr 17, '19

Yeah that's "bait and switch". Baiting is it's own thing.

Apr 16, '19

I ain't debating advertisement definitions. I just pointed out a flaw.

Apr 16, '19