Yeah but in universe her grey eyes mark her ability to kill hundreds of grim, so it's very important.
Some studies have shown that, on a global scale, grey eyes are actually the 2nd rarest eye color, green being the most rare.
rare isn't the same thing as weird, I already acknowledge that they were rare.
This one
nah nah nah nah nah nah nah nah nah nah TROLL CAAAAAVE!!
Ugh, what is it with us writers and creating the sense of anticipation and impending doom? We are sick, sick individuals.
This story uniquely has a "how the brain operates" flow of text which helps drive home how cerebral the mind functions under harsh conditions. Very interesting and the concept is terrifying. Well done! I look forward to reading more.
When I shared my novel to a friend, he referred me to a Jump+ manga called Empyreal Cabinet because the characters were "Gatekeepers". That was when I realized that the story I'm working on is, in a sense, an exorcism story, as it deals with otherworldly menace that's mostly supernatural and can possess people.
I don´t remember the exact words but the negative comments are always moremeaningful and interesting for me. 2 negative comments were like: - the story is full of clichÊs and tropes (correct)-the other comment was from a guy who was angry how predictablehe thought my story was (interesting)