My first comic, a scifi/fantasy story called Ascension

[TheObliviousOwl]

Hey guys so throughout most of my life I've loved to draw but was kind of afraid to start a comic. Storytelling just felt too personal, and it was scary to give people a glimpse into that. But a few weeks ago I decided to start something and would really appreciate it if anyone would read it, or even give some feedback. Thanks so so much

https://tapastic.com/series/ASCENSION

Synopsis: ASCENSION, often referred to as the Infinite City, extends endlessly in all directions. It is a home to both magic and technology, myth and man. Eve, a powerful Guardian, has returned after a five year absence to find the city plagued by a mysterious string of disappearances. Hannah, a close friend of Eve's, is pulled into the conflict, and finds herself grappling with this unforgiving city, and the labor of living and aching.

[ruffyodedraw]

It is easy to read, the vignettes are simple and the colors are not oversaturated; He would read? No, I think it's very bloody for me. But in short, it is very good.

[TheObliviousOwl]

Thanks so much for the comment and the feedback! I understand that the comic may be too violent and thats totally fine. Thanks again!

[kryzgro]

I don´t know if I´m really bad with constructive critiques or somnething, but I loved it.
The character design, the theme and the lovely not overly gross gore.
Still I would turn on the NSFW filter on the first episode.
And I love the fact that you haven´t updated any single pages. I mean, I´d rather read 10 pages every month than 1 page every third day.
keep up with the good work and good luck !

[TheObliviousOwl]

Awww, don't say that. I'm just really glad you enjoyed it! The gore might be a bit much, but I'm glad it didn't turn you off completely.

Thank you so much for the kind words. They are very motivating